那麼就仿照原翻譯的精神，用人工來修改一下翻譯...

Bon Jovi - In These arms - -ll

You want commitment你想要的承諾
=>你要的承諾

Take a look into these eyes來看看這些眼睛
=>拿一個看進到這些眼睛

They burn with a fire, just for you now他們燒燬與火，只為你，現在
=>他們燒毀與火，你加入剛剛現在
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Id beg, Id steal, Id die身份證乞討，偷竊身份證，身份證件模具
=>身份證乞討，偷竊身份證，身份證死掉

To have you in these arms tonight有你在，這些武器在今晚
=>去吃你在這些武器在今晚

Baby I want you like the roses寶寶我想你喜歡玫瑰
=>寶寶我要你像這些玫瑰
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Like a poet needs the pain像一個詩人需要痛
=>喜歡一個詩人需要痛
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Id tell you that Id never leave you身份證告訴你身份絕不會離開你
=>身份證告訴你那個身分證絕不會離開你
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