作者SoftPig

老實說，中英文都很怪.......

And沒有人放句首的........
最好花錢請專業人士順一下....

作者nzcym

先聲明--寫作練習.

The Audiophiles' Amplifier

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作者Trevelyan

nzcym大大翻的真好,這樣一看我的似乎太生硬了. 不過其中有很多細節是雜誌上沒有提到的,請問是平時就有在做研究然後補上的嗎?

我來補上下一篇,希望大家別見笑...

以下截錄自雜誌...

打開機箱,可以看到720的訊源輸入端與目前大部分 Hi End 前級一樣,採用不接地的繼電器來分離各個輸入訊號,避免相互干擾. 而且,左聲道與右聲道各自一片獨立線路版,另外 MC 唱頭放大線路版也是獨立一塊架在主線路上上面. 720的線路架構屬於非平衡設計.

The inner side of the case shows the input of 720 is as the same as the most of the Hi End preamplifiers nowadays, that is, an ungrounded relay is used to separate input signals individually to prevent them from interfering with one another.

Moreover, both the left and the right channels have their own circuit boards independently. Additionally, the circuit board of MC phono amplifier has, as well as the channels do, an independent circuit board built on the main circuit board, which makes the framework of 720 to be an unbalanced one.

再來看到720的音量控制線路.除了電阻與繼電器之外,這個音量控制系統還加入他們稱為PGA ( Programmable Gain Amplifier ) 的線路,這個PGA線路有什麼作用呢? 一來讓音量控制的反應更直接,二者可以延長繼電器接點的壽命.

Apart from resister and relay, the volume control circuit was also added with PGA, Programmable Gain Amplifier, which hastens the reaction when adjusting volume and prolong the lifetime of the contact of the relay.

待續...

作者N-IC

個人修改意見，歡迎指正：

Soulution, a new acoustic manufacturer of Switzerland, is a subsidiary company of Spemot AG - the famous electrical motor manufacturer.

拿掉了which ,否則這會是個不完整的句子.


Probably, many people will ask the basic questions : "Why would an electrical motor company want to build an acoustic company from the ground up? Isn't it more realistic by assembling these off-the-shelf subsystems together rather than re-design the whole system?".

個人以為此處將調整probably的位置到句首,感覺較順; most改成many感覺語氣比較不那麼武斷(most是指比例,many是指數量)..


Indeed, from the pure business point of view, it will be a terrible finicial disaster to "COST UP" the acoustic system, especially in the cost down trend of today's business world, but "cost" is not their only concern.

well改成indeed,並再加一句用來引導到後段的話.否則感覺這個段落似乎還沒結束.


Since 1997, when Cyrill Hammer and Roland Manz started the local distribution business of Audiolabor's product, they knew they want better product.

wanted改成want.


There is an old saying - "you get exactly what you pay for", and the two future owners of Soulution - Cyrill Hammer and Roland Manz both knew this slogan quite well. As seasoned audiophiles, both of them agreed that quality product required quality design, and then built from the quality parts with experienced technicians.

then改成and then,這樣才有整個程序連貫下去的感覺.


In order to make their dream come true, Cyrill and Roland asked the chief designer of Audiolabor - Christopher Schurmann to re-design a customer made amplifier system only reserved for themselves; this amplifier system was build purely based on audio performance, not the manufacturing cost.

realize their dream改成make their dream come true.


After five years hard working, the whole system which included the power amplifier and the preamplifier were finally finished. After the double-blind tryout, the three men team - Cyrill, Roland and Christopher believed their system was far superior any other current chimerical products.

any改成any other


They decided to build a company to share their dream product with this world. Therefore, they created the word - Soulution, which meant Soul and Solution (or Solution from Soul), to be the brand name. Their first kit was 720 preamplifiers and 710 stereo amplifiers, then continued with 721 preamplifiers and 700 mono amplifiers. In addition, there are also 740 CD Player sets and 750 LP phono amplifiers which, with 720 and 710, consist all of Soulution`s current line of products.

amplifier是可數名詞,所以複數要加s.
複數的CD Player加上計數單位set,成為sets.

作者oks

請問一下這組擴大機要多少錢?

作者Trevelyan

單位是百萬,我想一兩百萬跑不掉...