我個人認為你翻的有到意思了

要改的反而是中文
你現在要做的只是要把中文改的通順與好懂而已

不過有些地方你需要去查一下
我覺得應該不是那個意思
不過我不懂音響
可能那是術語也說不定
但是你參考一下

1.motor manufacturer 可能是指汽車製造商喔
2.consist all of Soulution`s family 那個family應該指的是產品系列的意思，可能翻成 "包括所有的soulution系列" 會比較好一點
3.With any cost, my own amplifier　我會大膽一點翻成 "專注完美，不計成本"

大大誤會了,那不是我寫的,那是雜誌主編寫的...

大大誤會了,要給老外看的是英文,那只是從雜誌節錄下的,雜誌主編的中文...

真的喔

老實說我真的覺得很像是英翻中的感覺XD

因為英文寫的比中文正常

這樣你懂我的意思嗎

呵呵,不過這只是一小段而已,真正令人頭痛的在後面.
我會晚點發,希望能有人協助...

小聲說,這雜誌還沒發行...

老實說，中英文都很怪.......

And沒有人放句首的........
最好花錢請專業人士順一下....

首先一件事, Spemot AG 也許真的是電動馬達(而非汽車)製造商.
http://www.spemot.com/

第二件事就是這個香港網站的相關報導
http://www.wisesound.com/product/detail.asp?id=1287

"spemot ag is successful swiss company active in developing and producing of electrotechnical devices and e-motors. our motors are find apllication in the automotive industry as well as in professional and semiprofessional tools. the business area electrotechnical appliances is focussed on devices for the professional gastronomy. our strenghts are innovative products and services for client specific market-needs.

we decided to build up the business area audio to further diversify our business portfolio and to benefit from potential synergies of electronic engineering with our existing business areas.

soulution is the brand of the business area audio of spemot ltd. the experience of our development team in the areas of audio-, appliance development as well as our production know how for high quality products are combined in the soulution products

to realise our perception of natural and transparent music reproduction we had to follow fundamentally new paths in respect of amplifier technology and the treatment of audio data."

廠方網站: www.soulution-audio.com

先聲明--寫作練習.

The Audiophiles' Amplifier

Soulution, a new acoustic manufacturer of Switzerland, which is a subsidiary company of Spemot AG - the famous electrical motor manufacturer. Most people probably will ask the basic questions : "Why would an electrical motor company want to build an acoustic company from the ground up? Isn't it more realistic by assembling these off-the-shelf subsystems together rather than re-design the whole system?" Well, from the pure business point of view, it will be a terrible finicial disaster to "COST UP" the acoustic system, especially in the cost down trend of today's business world.

Since 1997, when Cyrill Hammer and Roland Manz started the local distribution business of Audiolabor's product, they knew they wanted better product. There is an old saying - "you get exactly what you pay for", and the two future owners of Soulution - Cyrill Hammer and Roland Manz both knew this slogan quite well. As seasoned audiophiles, both of them agreed that quality product required quality design, then built from the quality parts with experienced technicians. In order to realize their dream, Cyrill and Roland asked the chief designer of Audiolabor - Christopher Schurmann to re-design a customer made amplifier system only reserved for themselves; this amplifier system was build purely based on audio performance, not the manufacturing cost.

After five years hard working, the whole system which included the power amplifier and the preamplifier were finally finished. After the double-blind tryout, the three men team - Cyrill, Roland and Christopher believed their system was far superior than any current chimerical products. They decided to build a company to share their dream product with this world. Therefore, they created the word - Soulution, which meant Soul and Solution (or Solution from Soul), to be the brand name. Their first kit was 720 preamplifier and 710 stereo amplifier, then continued with 721 preamplifier and 700 mono amplifier. In addition, there are also 740 CD Player and 750 LP phono amplifier which, with 720 and 710, consist all of Soulution`s current line of products.

雖然嚴格說起來這是不合文法的
但現在是有人會把And放在句首的