原句：
To make sure that the written program is sufficient to simulate the real economic activity, he has tested a series of calculations with different IR, PR and PMB as input data, and found that many variations are smaller than 5% in comparison with the real system.


（為了確保所編寫的程序是足夠的模擬真實的經濟活動，他已經測試了一系列的計算，並使用不同的IR，PR和PMB作為程式的輸入值，並發現相比真正的系統，許多變化量都小於5％。）



因為原句還是有不少個限定子句，
不知能否再進一步簡化為：
To make sure the written program of being sufficient to simulate the real economic activity, he has tested a series of calculations with different IR, PR and PMB as input data, and found many variations of being smaller than 5% in comparison with the real system.





我的想法是：
To make sure that the written program is sufficient to simulate the real economic activity

和
,and found that many variations are smaller than 5% in comparison with the real system.



這兩句都有一個SVC句型的名詞子句，不過因為名詞子句的主詞與主要子句的he不同： 主要子句：he has tested a series of calculations......

所以這兩個子句的主詞必須保留，並將主詞改為物的所有格（+of)，原先的be動詞改為動名詞型態（being)，

最後省略掉名詞子句的連接詞that變成：

To make sure the written program of being sufficient to simulate the real economic activity

和
,and found many variations of being smaller than 5% in comparison with the real system.


想請教一下，這種簡化方法，有無問題？