個人修改意見，歡迎指正：

Soulution, a new acoustic manufacturer of Switzerland, is a subsidiary company of Spemot AG - the famous electrical motor manufacturer.

拿掉了which ,否則這會是個不完整的句子.


Probably, many people will ask the basic questions : "Why would an electrical motor company want to build an acoustic company from the ground up? Isn't it more realistic by assembling these off-the-shelf subsystems together rather than re-design the whole system?".

個人以為此處將調整probably的位置到句首,感覺較順; most改成many感覺語氣比較不那麼武斷(most是指比例,many是指數量)..


Indeed, from the pure business point of view, it will be a terrible finicial disaster to "COST UP" the acoustic system, especially in the cost down trend of today's business world, but "cost" is not their only concern.

well改成indeed,並再加一句用來引導到後段的話.否則感覺這個段落似乎還沒結束.


Since 1997, when Cyrill Hammer and Roland Manz started the local distribution business of Audiolabor's product, they knew they want better product.

wanted改成want.


There is an old saying - "you get exactly what you pay for", and the two future owners of Soulution - Cyrill Hammer and Roland Manz both knew this slogan quite well. As seasoned audiophiles, both of them agreed that quality product required quality design, and then built from the quality parts with experienced technicians.

then改成and then,這樣才有整個程序連貫下去的感覺.


In order to make their dream come true, Cyrill and Roland asked the chief designer of Audiolabor - Christopher Schurmann to re-design a customer made amplifier system only reserved for themselves; this amplifier system was build purely based on audio performance, not the manufacturing cost.

realize their dream改成make their dream come true.


After five years hard working, the whole system which included the power amplifier and the preamplifier were finally finished. After the double-blind tryout, the three men team - Cyrill, Roland and Christopher believed their system was far superior any other current chimerical products.

any改成any other


They decided to build a company to share their dream product with this world. Therefore, they created the word - Soulution, which meant Soul and Solution (or Solution from Soul), to be the brand name. Their first kit was 720 preamplifiers and 710 stereo amplifiers, then continued with 721 preamplifiers and 700 mono amplifiers. In addition, there are also 740 CD Player sets and 750 LP phono amplifiers which, with 720 and 710, consist all of Soulution`s current line of products.

amplifier是可數名詞,所以複數要加s.
複數的CD Player加上計數單位set,成為sets.