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其實長相還不錯,嘴唇薄了點,不過看穿著姿態.....

沒什麼內涵的感覺...

Blog文章的話...說實話,蠻差的,一點也不內斂也沒有推敲琢磨的痕跡

彷彿是拿一堆詞彙堆砌而成,反而犯了自己為華麗的弊病,國高中生一開始拼文章大概都是這樣

寫歌詞?...可能要再多下工夫才行,名家作品多唸唸吧,要走美文風格,最好看看楊牧的東西

要有音韻風味,最好把戴舒望也翻一翻,要寫些言不及義的東西,最好還是多心碎受傷幾次才掰的有味道


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不過評論歸評論,我自己寫的也不怎麼樣(汗)
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