英文再怎麼簡化,也要照著字典走, 假如可以簡化省略的話,字典也會告訴你...

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過偏於文法, 聽跟說也可能有問題
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try another path of my own
試試我自己的路
try another path by my own 應改為 try another path by myself 或是 try another path on my own
我自己一個人去試試這條路