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12x12cm would be a better choice because it would be more quiet and the cooling performance might be better......

First, thx for your answer
In fact, your english is excellent!
Are u the best in your class?
I am young too, only 14 (bigger than you by 1 yrs old)~^^
I must tell you that in Hong Kong, rare students have good english like u at your age..........
(because I study in an English-teaching school, so I really know it)

Your reply has alomst no mistakes, but if you don't mind, i would like to give you some recommendation for improvements:
1."I am wondered" it should be "I wondered" --- > wonder no passive voice

P.S. I want to type this question in Chinese ar~ But there is no Chinese IME in my computer (As my mum force me to practise english =.=)


I see you have an msn messager account...........
I hv 1 too, if you don't mind, plx add me
and tell me who you are, thx
舊 2005-05-09, 09:11 AM #3
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