友人自創歌曲Yes, I Do (Demo)歡迎批評指教
 

Yes, I Do
歌名：Yes, I Do (Demo版)
演唱：Dario
編曲：Dario
歌詞：Dario

Would you love me twice
since you told me it's over

I'm along the street
every scene is so clear

Do you still remember
the last moment we stayed together

Have you ever dreamed that
I could persuade your father..woo...

You're lovely, so lovely
but I no longer feel
no longer feel you exist..woo

You're lovely, oh I can see
but you gonne leave
How could I accept this

but life's going...

REPEAT#

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作者本人↓


因為大概了解朋友與女友的事，聽完這首歌，特別的有感覺，
小小感想是，有點憂鬱，有點動容，有點不知所措，
很明瞭的說出他的心情，彷彿能嗅到那天午後的爭執 :cry:

不知各位網友對於此首歌，有任何看法!?
歡迎批評指教。
或是可以到小弟的部落格給予意見

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