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　　我今年暑假要回台灣，必須向政府證明我在大學的錄取資格。以下是我的錄取通知信和譯本、請各位幫忙我檢查是否有改進的地方，感激不盡！



親愛的程先生：

　　恭喜，而且歡迎！我很高興的通知你已經被許可進入密西根州立大學二零零六年秋季學期。

　　你將要加入的、學業傑出的學生社群是一群和你同樣表現出一股對成就的投入的學生。我們對你有著很高的期望、希望你能對密西根州立大學卓越的傳統特質。

　　身為國家首要的機構、密西根州立大學是負有名望的美國大學協會的會員之一。我們受到國際認可、傑出的成就和研究、教學、服務、以及探索將會提供你特有的機會和個人以及智慧成長。如果你尚未參觀過我們的校園、你一定會迫不及待的想要一探究竟。我們對於密西根州立大學有如公園般的校園感到非常驕傲，而身為一個新鮮的斯巴達人、你也會這麼覺得。

　　請務必詳讀這份包裹的內容並且遵照上面的指示來完成你在密西根州立大學的註冊。密西根州立大學的錄取資格是建立在你繼續在學業上的成就和滿足錄取的條件；高三成績重大的滑落可能會影響你在密西根州立大學的錄取資格。我們很有信心你會維持足以表現你的榮譽、高中、和大學的舉止。

　　在這裡代表我們的學生、系所、和全體教職員，恭喜而且歡迎！真誠的希望你將會在密西根州立大學獲得一個成功而且快樂的經驗。

Dear Mr. Chen,

Congratulations, and welcome! I am delighted to inform you of you admission to Michigan State University for Fall Semester 2006.

You are joining an outstanding academic community of students who, like you, have demonstrated a commitment to achievement. We have every expectation that you will contribute to the tradition of excellence that characterizes Michigan State University.

As the nation’s premier land grant institution, Michigan State University is a member of the prestigious Association of American Universities. We are recognized globally for our exemplary achievements and activities in research, teaching, service, and outreach which will provide you with outstanding opportunities for your intellectual and personal growth. If you have yet to visit campus, you will want to do so soon. We are particularly proud of MSU’s beautiful park-like setting and as a new Spartan, you will be, too.

Please review the contents of this packet carefully and follow all instructions to complete the steps necessary to secure your place at MSU. Admission to Michigan State University is contingent upon your continued academic success and satisfaction of established University admission criteria; a significant decline during your senior year may affect you enrollment status at MSU. We are confident that you will continue to perform in a manner that will reflect credit upon yourself, your high school, and the University.

On behalf of our students, faculty and staff, congratulations and welcome! You have our warmest wishes for a successful and enjoyable experience at Michigan State University.

Seincerely,