以下四句中文,如何譯為英文比較漂亮
 

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以上四句我怎麼譯都很口語化,但因作業需求,需譯得比較正式一些,想請各位網友幫幫忙,
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你先把你翻的貼上來給大家評論一下，這樣比較快

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雖然不是100%的翻譯﹐不過外國人應該比較看得懂。

先謝謝anomaly大流暢的翻譯,我原本翻的時候是逐字去翻,但是翻的結果讓英文系的室友覺得根本就是台式英語,所以就叫室友幫我翻譯,但是為求更好的翻譯品質,所以上來問問,看看有沒有人可以翻的更順暢,再次感謝anomaly大的回應,謝謝,至於我翻的,還是不要貼上來丟人現眼了

小改一下..

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也謝謝JeiJei大幫助

我覺得翻得很好耶
請問是讀外文系的嗎?

只是路過 ﹐不是外文的

再小改一下。如果要正式一點的話，最好避免用 You 這個字。

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希望有幫助 :D

嗯,謝謝leafing_blue大,您翻譯的真的很好